Was reading an old post Lip Liner .. tried to write something beyond it.
In the moonlight, i take the air and think everyday,
what had led me not to stay ?
Fascinating was thy world, enticed me into temptation,
engrossing me thoroughly, accepted the inclination,
still i passed through the other way,
wondering what had led me not to stay ?
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I wonder too what had led me not to stay ..
Nice piece babe as usual
P.S: I love the way you commented on my posts..its just full of wisdom..really :)
wat led u not to stay????:-) i guess familiarity proved to be too boring for you..and u set out for newer pastures..;-)
Nice play of words ha..
And i guess the search for novelty or maybe annoyance and sorrow at that which exists compels us to not stay ..
Mind blowing Reicha...I will take lessons from you on how to write once I'm back...It's so magical...Love it!
"wondering what had let me not to stay"...
so intrsopective and deep :)
"still i passed through the other way,
wondering what had led me not to stay ?"----wow!!!all i can say is now i am addicted to your blog :p
nicely arranged words....
Beautiful thoughts and words, Reicha!
Beautiful lines!!!
What else can I possibly say. Mesmerizing!If only I could write this way
@aleeya --> thanks darling.. I love to visit your blog and you know this very well. Your simple words are always perfect in its own ways.
@Rahul --> :P thanks for your comment. Sometimes we ask questions but the truth is, we already know the answer but don't wanna accept it. :)
Take care !!
@Crystal --> Hmm, may be, but, for something better i believe :)
@Saru --> OMG ! its your humbleness. A profound writer like you is always an inspiration for me. Is eager to meet you soon :)
@A grain of sand --> Thanks for your visit. :)
Take care !!
@Amigo --> Haha ! thanks, *blushing*
@Krishna --> Thank you :)
@Rahul sir --> Thanks for the appreciation !
@Red handed --> I am glad to see you here :) thanks for dropping a comment.
very nice ...let the people ponder ...good
Fascinating was thy world, enticed me into temptation,
engrossing me thoroughly, accepted the inclination,
still i passed through the other way,
Bhramar5
Ah....ur lines just make me feel of the "right" decision taken by a girl...its like she followed her basic instincts, even though the road was alluring and enticing....
being safe than sorry:)
wondeful :-) sometimes i too feel the same..
@Punam --> thanks..! Answer hmm, i'll find it soon :)
@ Surendra shukla --> Thanks for your visit sir.
@Rahul --> Thanks. oh okay. There is a long way to go ahead. Take care !
You deduced it so correctly..Must say
You are a true psychology student. ;)
This was the author's real intention but for the sake of poetry it was replaced by a question in the end.
Take care !
What could have happened always intrigues us na..
Sometimes looking back and wondering is good but sometimes it makes us loose the present that could have happened..
Like you i have also been pondering on a poem in past and wrote its second part :) ..co-incidence indeed!
Like the calm and longed nature of your penning..
tc
ur own conscious made u take such a decision for it was only right to let go and move ahead :)
PS : the mystery behind the title is still not solved :P
sarah
written beautifully .each and evry word seems very apt.
nice post:)
sorry for begin so late. thnx for the comment on my blog.
written beautifully .each and evry word seems very apt.
nice post:)
sorry for begin so late. thnx for the comment on my blog.
Reicha,
Beautiful... I can connect to your writing style.
"engrossing me thoroughly, accepted the inclination"..."led me not to stay"....
Amazing work...
Encore!!!
Wondering what had lead me not to stay :)oh well :) everyone's life story...
keep it up reicha <3 loved and the last line nailed it.
@Aakriti --> You deduced it so correctly..Must say
You are a true psychology student. ;)
This was the author's real intention but for the sake of poetry it was replaced by a question in the end.
Take care !
@Alcina --> Thanks alcina.. Oh ! yep i'll surely go through the second part of your poem. I'll love to read it :)
@Sarah --> Yep, the inner conscious speaks aloud and i step in that direction only. :)
PS: The mystery behind the title will remain a mystery till i don't get a good answer for your question.. :D
@Anuradha --> Thank you gal. I am glad to see you back :)
@AAnkeet --> Thanks. *smiling* :) Take care !!
@Chintan ji --> Everyone's life story :D
This post and your note of part one resembles a little(only part one) :P .. Grin on my face when i saw your comment on my post.
Your visit makes me happy :)
beautiful words , thanx for sharing....
Hey Welcome to my blog.. :) thanks for showing interest !!
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